well done - this is successful in illustrating all three techniques. Your actual footage is a little unclear - was the white balance and everything set as it should be on the camera? Framing is good in the main - perhaps a little more variety in shot distances with the actual characters would help. You go close so that you can read the letter - good. Your first MOA is a little mistimed, as a result it is a little too overlapping. A few shots could do with being a little better composed to avoid too many irrelevancies in the background. There is an awkward jump at one point, this will be due to a small gap on the edit time line. Overall it is successful - go forward now and make a success of your thriller opening. you have the basic tool with which to do this now.
well done - this is successful in illustrating all three techniques. Your actual footage is a little unclear - was the white balance and everything set as it should be on the camera? Framing is good in the main - perhaps a little more variety in shot distances with the actual characters would help. You go close so that you can read the letter - good. Your first MOA is a little mistimed, as a result it is a little too overlapping. A few shots could do with being a little better composed to avoid too many irrelevancies in the background. There is an awkward jump at one point, this will be due to a small gap on the edit time line. Overall it is successful - go forward now and make a success of your thriller opening. you have the basic tool with which to do this now.
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